New script for the radio ancillary

This is the new script because the last one I didn't feel that it was as effective as I'd like it to be. Mainly because it is more verisimilitude if it has a child's dialogue in it. I will have a new voice actor for this line, it is my brother and he is very enthusiastic about sports. I have also shortened it to get the point across quickly rather than having it long winded and it not having the ultimate effect of the aspirers buying the boots. It all felt to formal and stiff I wanted it to mean something and relate to my audience

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